SUACT - Leningrad
Foundation tracks at ShipWreck are good.
Drums should expressively follow rest of the instrumentation outlining and following the weight of the lyrics.
Jacey needs to redo vocals, a lot is good but with his new found skills he can push it over the top.
Joe needs to do his harmonies.
Maybe some strings our airy synth type stuff in the bridges and slower parts.
Marching sounds fading in and out of verses.